文/刘宝彩/天津
“英语作文没词儿写,有词儿不知怎么写,咋办呢?作文已知条件一看就会,单词语法都懂,我怎么把英语作文一写就得高分呢?”考生经常提问这样的问题。为此给考生写作两篇英语作文作为备考选项题目:第一篇作文题目《致意奋战在抗击奥密克戎病毒一线的医护人员及志愿者》;第二篇题目《请你谈个人、医生、政府共同抗疫情态度和感悟》。
第一篇《致意奋战在抗击奥密克戎病毒一线的医护人员及志愿者》,写一封英文信据三点已知条件写:1.表达谢意;2.个人感受;3.表达信心。可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词语:流行病epidemic;疫情epidemic situation;奥密克戎病毒Omicron-21 coronavirus
英语写作正文如下:
Dear Medical workers and volunteers,
As one of high middle-school students, I, Li Hua, write you a letter expressing sincere gratitude to you, for your devotion in this battle against the Omicron-21 virus. Its illnesses associated with serious infection enables people to stay indoors in an unimaginably horrible situation.
You keep an eye on infection-fighting requirements met for health of people, whom to turn favorable to making them healthy at their services you doctors offered to in fighting not only against Omicron-21 virus but its fear. This has me feel confident of Omicron-21 battle victory by fighting against its epidemic situation.
This inspires me to give you a round of applause for your still working day and night, that believes in your working hard at stopping infection from spreading to one part from other. Your decisive-and-effective action makes people helpful in protecting them from being infected with disease possibly at its epidemic risk.
Day by day and night by night, you together volunteers are at work that gets all of you admired and/or respected by all people for their physical health. This keeps me positive about saying you that I join them in sending my thanks to you for your great efforts you made on and kind help offered to all people.
Good luck !
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第二篇题目《请你谈个人、医生、政府共同抗疫情态度和感悟》,写一篇议论文,根据三点提示写:㈠核酸检测要戴口罩两米距离排队等候检测;㈡谈医生和志愿者毫无畏惧病毒风险付出努力工作之想法;㈢你谈政府组织作核酸等防疫安排之态度。
参考词语:nucleic-acid test核酸检测;negative for Covid-19 virus阴性病毒;infecting传染;virus-preventing battle防疫抗疫;keep two-meter distance reasonably and safely两米安全距离;in return for doctors and volunteers报答医生和志愿者;healthy mission remains the greatly original aspiration健康使命保持远大志向;at-all-level government 各级政府the in-effective-organization system有效组织系统;Omicron virus奥密克戎病毒;戴口罩wear mask。
英语写作正文如下:
It is OK to do a nucleic-acid test which is showing whether it can prove negative for Omicron virus passed on to people out of whom risk is to get and stopped accurately from infecting here and there.
When needing to be tested, they had to put masks on to show they would make doctors and volunteers respected and themselves done throughout virus-preventing battle. This brings people to prevent infection from spreading everywhere and to have physical health.
It takes courage for the doctors and volunteers to do so potentially at risk or in danger, without fear actually, at the test-doing time.
As this time sees, naturally, people had to wear masks and are asked to keep reasonably-safe distance for two meters between them, standing in line to await a test to be done for COVID-19.
So did they protect people from the virus to be in good health. This the people held responsible for controlling the disease in return for doctors and volunteers who work hard at winning battle against virus day and night, by their obligation arising from their responsibilities.
Their and our dream is expected to come true, depending on going through all the sweat, for their developing well healthily.
So perfectly efficiently does people’s health-enjoying mission remain the greatly original aspiration, setting in mind sincerely.
I look straight in their brilliant or bright eyes without seeing their lovely gentle faces. As is known to me, combining with this, doctors and volunteers are watched to remain busy with doing the test, in good order, for Omicron virus so adequately that they could not be seen to smile sweetly.
This enables me to find it right of them to be regarded as being guardians in charge of people’s health.
That helps me feel proud of the medical action that can be taken by the at-all-level government’s making the in-effective-organization system stronger at present than in the past, especially in fighting against COVID-19 virus to arrange for people properly to be at work and in life, to need returning normal step by step as soon as possible, happily and conveniently.
第二篇英语作文大意如下:
做核酸检测是好事,因为它可以显示出证明人体是否有阴性病毒,这样人们可以摆脱风险而精准阻止病毒到处传染。为此测试时,人们就需要戴口罩儿。这也是人们既对医生和志愿者的尊敬也是对他们自己的尊敬。如此人们防病毒扩散而身体得到健康。
做核酸检测时面临潜在风险和危险,医生和志愿者是需要勇气的,实际上毫无畏惧风险。此时自然理解,人们须要佩戴口罩并请要保持合理安全的当两米距离,排队等候作核酸检测。
所以医生和志愿者保护人们健康免遭疾病,这样人们有责任控制疾病,来报答医生和志愿者以其最大的责任、义务,日日夜夜与病毒战斗的辛劳。
为此期待着他们的我们的良好的健康梦想,通过取决于付出的汗水而实现。所以完全有效健康的使命需要保持远大志向,忠诚牢记在心。
我看不见医生和志愿者温暖温柔的面孔,却看得见他们美丽的眼睛;看不见他们甜美的笑容,却看见他们全力以赴有条不紊地作检测奥密克戎病毒之忙碌的身影。所以我认为他们是负责人民健康的守卫者的判断是正确的。
为此我感到对这种做法很自豪,因为各级政府有效组织系统现在要比过去强大,特别是在防疫斗争中适当的安排人们尽可能地逐步恢复正常快乐而便利的工作和生活。
总结:
上述篇两英语作文均衡使用英语逻辑思维四方法写作:①一因一果;②一因多果;③多因一果;④多因多果。其中逻辑思维表达形式是:“左找原因句←主题提示句→右找结果”(即:以主题提示句为中心,左找原因,右找结果)是关键之关键。
达到实战英语写作快速捷径是:不靠模板靠逻辑写作英语作文。为此考生如以“抗击疫情防病毒”为题 写作出类似优秀英语作文,那么就是得高分了。
广大考生们英语写作之今日努力,绽放明日希望,铸就未来辉煌——向广大考生们写英语作文成功得高分招手!
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